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SAMPLES AND VOCAB FOR ESSAY – TOPIC SOCIETY

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SAMPLE 1

Topic:Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week.

Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

Band 8 Sample

Technology has come such a long way nowadays that people can make use of their mobile phone to answer work or personal calls at any time. Although there are some negative consequences of this development on individuals and society, I believe that they are outweighed by the positive effects.

On the individual aspect, the fact that no work calls are missed could greatly enhance one’s work efficiency. As we are living in the era of globalisation, the international cooperation between companies is common and necessary. Being able to make calls and discuss with business partners regardless of time zones is a great advantage. On a larger scale, this can also contribute to the development of the economy, thus an increase in the living standard. Furthermore, people can benefit from the fact that their beloved ones are available for a call at any time. One could seek help from their friends and family whenever they need, which is especially beneficial in case of emergency. And as the flow of information between people is constant, society will be connected and move forward.

However, the drawbacks of this development should not be overlooked. Being able to answer calls all the time means people have less privacy, even in their own home. It also means that workers have to handle a larger amount of workload and have less quality time for their family. However, the work-life balance could still be maintained by just a simple act of switching off one’s mobile phone whenever they leave the office or do not want to be bothered.

In conclusion, despite a few drawbacks, the use of mobile phones for work and personal calls brings about more benefits to individuals and society.

(Band 8.0, Tham khảo.)

Vocabulary highlights:

  1. Enhance work efficiencygia tăng năng suất lao động
  2. Era of globalizationthời đại hội nhập hoá
  3. Case of emergencytrường hợp khẩn cấp
  4. Work-life balance: sự cân bằng giữa công việc – cuộc sống

SAMPLE 2

Topic:The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills.

To what extent you agree or disagree? 

Band 8 Sample

It is true that more and more young people are getting involved in crime, and the best way to address this critical issue is an ongoing debate. There are many ways to prevent youth crime, one of which is better parenting skills; however, those ways need to be carried out simultaneously if they are to be effective.

On the one hand, parents are the closest people to their children and are the most likely to be able to have an impact on their children’s behavior. In fact, the large majority of youth crime nowadays is the result of inappropriate parenting, and a lack of childcare and crime education. Therefore, it is totally reasonable to say that improving parenting skills will cause a decrease in juvenile offences.

However, education at home alone is not enough since there are a lot of kids who are not willing to listen to their parents. In this day and age, children spend the largest amount of time at school, and therefore are more likely to be influenced by their teachers or friends. For example, in my home country of Vietnam, many high school students are susceptible to negative peer pressure. This usually leads to the increasing use of alcohol or drugs, all of which are primary contributors to crime at this age. These facts suggest that we should introduce education in the school curriculum about the consequences one may face when committing an offence, as well as help children manage negative peer pressure.

In conclusion, enhancing skills to educate children at home is a good way to curb juvenile delinquencies; however, I think there is no single best way to achieve this as different measures need to be taken at the same time.

Vocabulary highlights:

  1. Result of inappropriate parenting and a lack of childcare and crime education: kết quả của việc làm cha mẹ không đúng cách và thiếu sự chăm sóc cũng như giáo dục về tội phạm
  2. Juvenile offencesphạm tội ở tuổi thành niên
  3. Susceptible to negative peer pressuredễ bị ảnh hưởng bởi áp lực tiêu cực từ bạn bè
  4. Curb juvenile delinquencieskiềm hãm sự phạm tội ở tuổi vị thành niên

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