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BÀI MẪU BAND 9.0 WRITING TASK 1

Tài liệu nóng phỏng tay luôn nè, vừa bài mẫu band 9 chuẩn mực cho những đề writing task 1 khó nhằn, vùa có nhận xét và chấm điểm của examiner, giúp các bạn có tư liệu tham khảo cách hành văn và miêu tả đồng thời biết được cái nào ăn điểm cao trong task 1 và tại sao bài mẫu lại được band 9.

1.Line Graph

Answer:

The line graph displays the stock values of four different high-tech corporations from 2011 to 2016.

Overall, Facebook’s value steadily increased, while Yahoo’s decreased. Apple’s stock price fluctuated wildly throughout the period, and Google’s stayed relatively unchanged.

Facebook started the period with a stock market valuation of approximately 7,500, and this consistently moved up in value year on year to reach a peak of around 20,000 in 2016. Yahoo began the recorded period with a very similar value to Facebook, but in contrast, its stock devalued every year, until it reached a low of about 2,500 in 2016.

Apple stock was valued at just below 5,000 in 2011, and this jumped dramatically to nearly 35,000 the following year, before plummeting to around 7,000 in 2013. It recovered slightly in 2014 to around 12,000 and subsequently fell to a price of just over 5,000 in 2016. Google’s shares remained at around 1,000 for the entire period.

Answer:

The line graph compares the number of visits to 2 newly established websites, Music Choice and Pop Parade over a period of 15 days.

During the first three days Pop Parade received about 120 thousand daily visits, while Music Choice started well beneath, recording between 20 and 40 thousand visits. Between the third and the ninth day, Pop Parade experienced a gradual downward trend reaching a low of about 40 thousand views, just beyond Music Choice, which during this period levelled off between 20 and 40 thousand. Over the last 6 days visits to Pop Parade increased sharply, reaching a peak of more than 140 thousand visits and obtaining even better results in the last two days, after a short dip. On the other hand, Music Choice soared to 120 thousand only in the 12th period, remained stable the following two days and then dropped to less than 80 thousand visits.

To sum up, the data clearly illustrates that the number of visits to Pop Parade website was higher than that of Music Choice throughout the period with the exception of two days and both websites experienced an upward trend in the number of visits.

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